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LavronYor
LavronYor
Registered: August 2005
Location: Flemington, New Jersey, USA
Posts: 487
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Mon February 26, 2007 3:25pm
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Once again, looks good, but is hard to tell.
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Vorokoth
Registered: June 2006
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Mon February 26, 2007 9:23pm
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Little or no shading visible on the figure.
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Bobcat
Registered: February 2007
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Tue February 27, 2007 4:38am
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Agreed. needs shading. Can also see where some of the pink tinting didn't go too well on the final picture (underside of thigh, near the boot). Some light sanding to get rid of that unfortunate mold seam would be good too.
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Maestro
John Thompson
Registered: September 2006
Location: Breda, the Netherlends
Posts: 274
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Tue February 27, 2007 5:14am
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Hmmm, a bit flat and lacking in the detail-departement.
John
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gi6ers
Registered: August 2005
Location: Herts, UK
Posts: 741
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Tue February 27, 2007 5:28am
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A bit flat and you've missed some mould lines...
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sniffles
Bad, naughty, evil Zoot.
Registered: March 2006
Location: Portland, OR USA
Posts: 3
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Tue February 27, 2007 12:13pm
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Needs more shading and highlighting.
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Duende
Where am I again?
Registered: August 2005
Location: Chambersburg, PA
Posts: 2,082
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Tue February 27, 2007 3:43pm
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Need much more definition in the face, her eyes look like they were only dotted and her butt looks mishapen. Sorry to be so harsh, but she needs much more work. I do like your choice of hair color though.
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Coneman
Registered: October 2006
Location: Adelaide, South Australia
Posts: 124
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Tue February 27, 2007 7:32pm
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could use more work in lots of areas, the mold line is not the least.
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mahon
Slow and lazy
Registered: June 2006
Location: Poland
Posts: 15
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Wed February 28, 2007 3:49am
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When I saw the mini on the small photo I thought: WOW, it looks as if it was flooded in light! This would create a striking amnd eyecatching effect, but unfortunately theskin looks flat and unfinished. At least some washing - if nothing more complicated - would improve the quality of the skin. And practise painting eyes a bit more.
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callumrice
Representin the Euro's!!
Registered: September 2006
Location: Scotland
Posts: 702
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Wed February 28, 2007 5:48am
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agree with lavronyor, the photos could do with being closer to get the real detail.
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Coil
Registered: October 2006
Location: Stockholm, Sweden
Posts: 20
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Wed February 28, 2007 3:26pm
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The mold line definitely has to go. Seems a bit unfinished.
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chonk34
Buckle-Swasher
Registered: February 2007
Location: Meridian, Idaho
Posts: 20
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Wed February 28, 2007 4:25pm
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Looks better in the small pictures than in the larger pics, where more detail is evident. A great start to a project, but needs shading and tidying up.
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Jabberwocky
Registered: September 2005
Location: Overland Park, Kansas
Posts: 1,051
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Wed February 28, 2007 5:50pm
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The base is the strongpoint on this one. I might suggest some darklining to set off her boots and hair from the skin.
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orkydave
trying and learning!
Registered: January 2007
Location: Coventry, Englandshire
Posts: 238
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Wed February 28, 2007 8:03pm
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Very flat and bits of white primer showing, I like the base though, really gives the impression she is dancing under a spotlight.
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Wed February 28, 2007 9:23pm
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chalky looking eyes need work
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Thryth
Registered: March 2006
Posts: 763
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Wed February 28, 2007 11:49pm
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Nice idea for basing the miniature. If she is supposed to be in a spotlight, you might consider using sharp highlighting/shading.
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pete-h
Registered: September 2005
Location: UK
Posts: 20
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A shame on the mold lines, but the idea is a nice one. This would be perfect mini for an OSL approach with the spotlight.
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cdukino
Wyrd News Monkey
Registered: August 2005
Location: Eindhoven, The Netherlands
Posts: 939
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seems unfinished. The basics are there but work on it stopped to early. Needs more definition and shading.
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Tyron
Registered: March 2007
Posts: 4
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It require a little work the more... it seems a little unfinished! 
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supervike
IPMC
Registered: September 2005
Location: The Corn State
Posts: 4,935
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gasp! How scandalous!! Nice one.
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Wren
Registered: October 2005
Location: Knoxville, TN.
Posts: 1,641
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I like the bright blue ring, looks like neon lights at a strip club. The sideways gaze works well with the sculpt, and the red hair looks pretty nice. The entire figure needs more shading and darklining to define areas and shapes, and there look to be some unfortunate mouldlines.
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Art-de-Vivre
Registered: September 2005
Location: Paris, France
Posts: 100
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I agree with above comments : very nice base, flat skintones and dotted eyes; but having said that, the zenithal lighting effect seems great and would have benefitted from a better OSL technique.
Nice entry !
Cheers !
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lauth81
Electronaut
Registered: August 2005
Location: Dublin, Ireland
Posts: 449
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I guess the colours are a bit washed out due to lighting conditions during the pic taking process. Hair could have used more work.
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cheddarmonger
Registered: August 2005
Location: Minnesota, USA
Posts: 1
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I think the hair looks pretty good, but the skin is very pale and lacks definition.
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Hinton
Registered: October 2006
Location: York, NE
Posts: 1,982
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Sat March 3, 2007 10:21am
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A pretty good idea for this mini and the base looks good.
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