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gi6ers
Registered: August 2005
Location: Herts, UK
Posts: 741
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Mon February 26, 2007 4:08pm
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She looks very flat to me, not sure the background helps you...
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Bobcat
Registered: February 2007
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Tue February 27, 2007 3:58am
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Nice base, but definitely needs some shading and highlighting. The skin seems very pale and washed out.
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Maestro
John Thompson
Registered: September 2006
Location: Breda, the Netherlends
Posts: 274
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Tue February 27, 2007 4:15am
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The background really distracts from the model.. Which is too bad I think.
John
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Coneman
Registered: October 2006
Location: Adelaide, South Australia
Posts: 124
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Tue February 27, 2007 8:07am
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Doesnt appear to be any highlights on the legs and the face is too bright
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sniffles
Bad, naughty, evil Zoot.
Registered: March 2006
Location: Portland, OR USA
Posts: 3
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Tue February 27, 2007 6:26pm
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She looks very flat and I wish you hadn't photographed her in front of the big set piece. It's distracting. I'd like to see her, not the background.
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Coil
Registered: October 2006
Location: Stockholm, Sweden
Posts: 20
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Wed February 28, 2007 2:15pm
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A bit ahrd too see. The skin looks flat (part of it may be the photo though).
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chonk34
Buckle-Swasher
Registered: February 2007
Location: Meridian, Idaho
Posts: 20
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Wed February 28, 2007 4:14pm
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Needs a better close-up of the model. She looks good from a distance, though.
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cdukino
Wyrd News Monkey
Registered: August 2005
Location: Eindhoven, The Netherlands
Posts: 939
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Wed February 28, 2007 6:04pm
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A bit flat looking. The skin, hair and armour are to close in colour, or could do with a bit of darklining to set them appart. Hair looks good from the back as does the red.
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orkydave
trying and learning!
Registered: January 2007
Location: Coventry, Englandshire
Posts: 238
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Wed February 28, 2007 7:10pm
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A neat job, but very flat, I also feel that more mini less background would help the picture, or a base that compliments the backdrop.
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Duende
Where am I again?
Registered: August 2005
Location: Chambersburg, PA
Posts: 2,082
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Wed February 28, 2007 8:33pm
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Her hair is nicely done but the rest of her is flat. Also I don't like that her base doesn't match the background.
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Wed February 28, 2007 10:31pm
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skin sweems very pale needs more shading
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mahon
Slow and lazy
Registered: June 2006
Location: Poland
Posts: 15
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Flat and dominated by the scenery in the background. Apply some shading to give some depth.
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supervike
IPMC
Registered: September 2005
Location: The Corn State
Posts: 4,935
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Kind of reminds me of Elektra.
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Thryth
Registered: March 2006
Posts: 763
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Interesting idea for the base.
The miniature would probably benefit from more highlighting/shading.
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callumrice
Representin the Euro's!!
Registered: September 2006
Location: Scotland
Posts: 702
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The base doesnt go with the setting she is in and its hard to see her when the pic is so far back!
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lauth81
Electronaut
Registered: August 2005
Location: Dublin, Ireland
Posts: 449
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I would have left that wall out of the picture. You need mor shading and highlights. The eyes look odd.
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pete-h
Registered: September 2005
Location: UK
Posts: 19
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Fri March 2, 2007 11:25am
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Some more highlights/shading would help here.
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Jabberwocky
Registered: September 2005
Location: Overland Park, Kansas
Posts: 1,051
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Fri March 2, 2007 11:32am
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Cool little base and the beginning of some good highlighting on the hair. I think some darklining would help to get her to pop.
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Hinton
Registered: October 2006
Location: York, NE
Posts: 1,982
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The hair, especially the back part, look really good to me.
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Inarah
Registered: February 2007
Location: midwest USA
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Nice neat paint job, but your shading is too subtle.
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Wren
Registered: October 2005
Location: Knoxville, TN.
Posts: 1,641
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The scenery is lovely, although honestly she doesn't really look like she's a part of it. I like the red and the hair on the figure, and the colour scheme is solid. The lighter areas of skin and armour look like they need a lot more shadowing or a wash or something.
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cheddarmonger
Registered: August 2005
Location: Minnesota, USA
Posts: 1
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You're on the right track, good attention to detail here, but the skin is really flat. Also, the background is really distracting.
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LavronYor
LavronYor
Registered: August 2005
Location: Flemington, New Jersey, USA
Posts: 487
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Mon March 5, 2007 10:48am
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Shading and blacklining would really help.
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