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supervike
05-22-2008, 03:41 PM
Remember doing Haiku's in school?

5 syllables

7 syllables

5 syllables.


Nathan you have made
The Wyrdest Mini World Around
Paint, collect, and play

He kills just for fun
Large, obese, zombified thing
call him Killjoy, please

Lillith, Mommy Dear
Beautiful temptress of hate
Her sons are calling


supervike whats up?
haiku instead of painting?
we all weep for you.


Lamest post ever?
Perhaps you can do better?
I'd like to see that.

Duende
05-22-2008, 07:45 PM
A haiku request
What do you think we are, Vike?
Poets or something?

Frustrated Father
05-22-2008, 08:39 PM
Hah, best Haiku over the next week gets a $20 gift certificate, decided on amongst a few of the folks in the back end.

Me .. I suck at them, but love this sort of stuff.

v22TTC
05-22-2008, 08:50 PM
Taught Haikus in school?
In what cosmopolitan
Land do you reside?

v22TTC
05-22-2008, 08:53 PM
A haiku request
What do you think we are, Vike?
Poets or something?

Not poets perhaps
But some are influenced
By them - check my sig

v22TTC
05-22-2008, 09:06 PM
And so we wait, pain
The IP scores are due in
Twenty points for me? :( ;)

supervike
05-23-2008, 08:59 AM
Gift Certificate?
Just for making nice poems
Nathan is the man.


Come on folks!! Just write a corny Haiku, and you could turn that into a couple of fine metal minis!!

Ritual
05-23-2008, 09:14 AM
Has Eric sent you
his Iron Painter scores yet?
We're dying to know...

supervike
05-23-2008, 09:51 AM
Unfortunately
There are no I P Scores yet
but i have much faith

Ritual
05-23-2008, 10:30 AM
Thank God, it's Friday!
This week has been slower than
a really slow thing!

EricJ
05-23-2008, 12:28 PM
I have been slacking
torches and pitchforks coming
scores finally in!

redstripe
05-23-2008, 01:09 PM
On rails it rattles
through the breach between the worlds.
I wish you were here.

Frigid winter wind,
Flee from its deadly whisper.
Her soul colder still.

The voice of the dead
survives on in ancient pages
to haunt the living.

Poetry, for me,
is much like pornography.
Redstripe: Linguiphile.

supervike
05-23-2008, 05:44 PM
just words on a post
Seventeen Syllables Long
Walk away with loot




The Darkness Stirring
Sense a Flutter of movement
The stink of death nears


Innocent or not
The verdict being given
The Judge knows of guilt


Outside Winter comes
Desperate you cling to hope
She will freeze the heart

Laughter gay and free
Underneath dark and dreary
The Hatter chuckles

Anders tall and thin
From the land of ice and snow
paints like a norse god

;)

Duende
05-23-2008, 07:58 PM
Memorial Day
My three day weekend at last!
Time to paint Bad Bones!

ThunderhawkerMinis
05-23-2008, 08:38 PM
I dodged a bullet
I get to participate
In the third round. Yay!

waghorn41
05-25-2008, 02:54 PM
If I could but paint
Success would surely be mine
I try, fail again

Wyrd miniatures
A true cornucopia
Figures of delight

Jabberwocky
05-25-2008, 11:25 PM
CMoN shreds ego
Slave over my piece for hours
Still just six point eight?

ThunderhawkerMinis
05-26-2008, 12:13 AM
Don't sweat it Jabber
I looked at your Gallery
You have improved lots

Over one year's time
That is nothing to sneeze at
So keep your chin up

Jabberwocky
05-26-2008, 06:30 AM
Malifaux the game
Something wicked this way comes
It shall soon be mine

supervike
06-04-2008, 09:44 PM
Nathan choose one please
then this thread can be all done
No more haiku, Bless!


My favorites:

Red Stripe

On rails it rattles
through the breach between the worlds.
I wish you were here.

Jabberwocky:

Malifaux the game
Something wicked this way comes
It shall soon be mine

Frustrated Father
06-05-2008, 12:17 AM
I think we'll leave it to a public vote and see who comes out on top.

I'll put it together tonight when I get back to the house unless one of the helpful mods around here want to take a run at it beforehand.

Frustrated Father
06-05-2008, 03:12 PM
Alrighty, added the poll, vote away. Good for three days worth of votes, person with the most votes at the end of it gets the gift certificate.

Thanks for having a bit of fun and taking the time to entertain.

supervike
06-06-2008, 12:21 PM
VOTE!

If you are going to only vote one time this year, make sure its in this Poll!!!

(Obama and McCain don't need your pity!!)

Speaking of voting, I'm coming out to endorse my candidate publicly!


http://briansp.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2007/10/cthulhu4prez.jpg

Frustrated Father
06-06-2008, 12:56 PM
Go ahead and vote folks ... hell, to sweeten the pot, everyone that takes the time to vote will be sent a PM showing off some advanced artwork and sculpted greens of a rather nice Paul Muller piece which we just had finished up.

How's that for incentive.

Jim, love the sticker, I want it.

Frustrated Father
06-10-2008, 03:53 AM
Congrats to Redstripe (Nick), he won the haiku poll and gets the gift certificate.

I'll send a PM with some previews to folks who votes here in the next day or so.

supervike
06-11-2008, 09:35 PM
Of course I wasn't included in the voting!!!

OTHERWISE I WOULD HAVE CRUSHED YOU! lol